B1 · Module 02 · Class 07 — The Connective Tissue
Narrative Scene
Santiago Reviews the Recommendations Section "The market analysis reads well," Elena tells Santiago over coffee. "The hedging is right, the register is clean. But the recommendations section — I can't follow the logic. It jumps from one point to the next without any signposting."
Santiago prints Marco's draft and sits down with a red pen. He circles three places where Marco has moved from one idea to the next with no connecting phrase. Then he calls Marco in.
"The issue isn't your thinking," he says. "The issue is that the reader can't see how your ideas connect. You need connective tissue — discourse markers. They're the road signs of a report."
He writes six categories on the whiteboard. "Every formal document uses all of these." |
Report Structure | ||
signposting | /ˈsaɪnpəʊstɪŋ/ | Language that guides the reader through the structure of a text |
discourse marker | /ˈdɪskɔːs ˌmɑːkə/ | A word or phrase that signals the logical relationship between ideas |
connective | /kəˈnektɪv/ | A word that joins clauses, sentences, or paragraphs and shows how they relate |
transition | /trænˈzɪʃən/ | A movement from one idea, section, or topic to another in a document |
coherence | /kəʊˈhɪərəns/ | The quality of being logically connected and easy to follow as a whole text |
consequently | formal result | Demand fell sharply. Consequently, several suppliers exited the market. |
as a result | very common, slightly less formal | The audit identified irregularities. As a result, further investigation was commissioned. |
therefore | logical conclusion | The data is incomplete; therefore, no firm projection can be offered at this stage. |
thus | formal, concise | The fund is well-positioned; thus, early entry is recommended. |
it follows that | introduces a logical deduction | Margins are tightening. It follows that cost restructuring is now a priority. |
Six Categories of Formal Discourse Markers
Formal discourse markers signal six types of logical relationship in professional writing. The choice of marker tells the reader not just that two ideas are connected, but HOW they connect.
1. ADDITION — adding a point that supports the same direction
ADDITION | ||
furthermore | strong addition, formal | The analysis confirmed declining margins. Furthermore, liquidity ratios deteriorated across all segments. |
moreover | stronger than "also" | Costs increased by 14%. Moreover, revenue growth failed to compensate for this rise. |
in addition (to this) | neutral, very common | In addition, three market risks were identified during the assessment phase. |
additionally | formal, single adverb | Additionally, the regulatory environment is expected to tighten in 2027. |
it should also be noted that | draws extra attention | It should also be noted that comparable firms reported similar trends. |
2. CONTRAST — introducing an opposing or limiting point
CONTRAST | ||
however | most common formal contrast | The projections are positive. However, significant execution risk remains. |
nevertheless / nonetheless | concedes a point, then counters it | The market is volatile. Nevertheless, the long-term fundamentals are sound. |
in contrast | compares two different things | Sector A showed strong growth. In contrast, Sector B contracted sharply. |
on the other hand | balances two perspectives | Option A reduces risk. On the other hand, Option B offers higher returns. |
while / whereas | within-sentence contrast | While costs have risen, revenue has remained broadly stable. |
3. RESULT / CONSEQUENCE — showing what follows from something
RESULT / CONSEQUENCE | ||
consequently | formal result | Demand fell sharply. Consequently, several suppliers exited the market. |
as a result | very common, slightly less formal | The audit identified irregularities. As a result, further investigation was commissioned. |
therefore | logical conclusion | The data is incomplete; therefore, no firm projection can be offered at this stage. |
thus | formal, concise | The fund is well-positioned; thus, early entry is recommended. |
it follows that | introduces a logical deduction | Margins are tightening. It follows that cost restructuring is now a priority. |
4. CONCESSION — acknowledging a limitation or counterpoint
CONCESSION | ||
although / even though | introduces concession clause | Although the timeline is ambitious, it is considered achievable. |
despite / in spite of | followed by a noun phrase | Despite the uncertainty, the recommendation remains unchanged. |
admittedly | concedes a weakness honestly | Admittedly, the sample size is limited; the findings are nonetheless indicative. |
it must be acknowledged that | formal, balanced tone | It must be acknowledged that full implementation will require significant resources. |
while it is true that | balances before countering | While it is true that risks exist, the projected returns justify the exposure. |
5. EMPHASIS — highlighting what is most important
EMPHASIS | ||
in particular | singles out one element | Several risks were identified, in particular the regulatory exposure in Chile. |
notably / most notably | draws attention to a key fact | The fund outperformed benchmarks — most notably in Q3 and Q4. |
it is worth noting that | flags an important detail | It is worth noting that this figure excludes contingency reserves. |
above all | signals the most important point | Above all, the timeline must be agreed before due diligence begins. |
it should be stressed that | formal, emphatic | It should be stressed that these projections are based on current data only. |
6. EXEMPLIFICATION — introducing evidence or illustrations
EXEMPLIFICATION | ||
for instance / for example | neutral, widely used | Several structural issues were noted — for instance, the absence of a risk committee. |
such as | inline list or example | Key risks, such as currency exposure and regulatory change, were modelled. |
to illustrate | introduces a concrete example | To illustrate, Sector C returned 14% over five years under comparable conditions. |
as evidenced by | links claim to data | The market is growing, as evidenced by the 22% increase in transaction volume. |
this is reflected in | links idea to data source | Investor confidence is improving. This is reflected in recent capital inflows. |
Phrasal Verbscome down to — to be ultimately determined by one key factor "All these options come down to one question: what level of risk is Vantage willing to accept?" fall short of — to fail to reach a target or expectation "The initial projections fell short of the 12% threshold required to trigger the next phase." stand out — to be noticeably better, more important, or more obvious "Of the three markets assessed, Colombia stood out for its regulatory stability and deal flow." |
Read the recommendations section from the Vantage Capital Partners proposal.
Identify all discourse markers and note which category each belongs to.
SECTION 5 — RECOMMENDATIONS ─────────────────────────────────────────────────
Based on the analysis set out in Sections 3 and 4, three recommendations are presented below. Each is supported by the data and modelling conducted during the engagement.
5.1 MARKET PRIORITISATION
It is recommended that Vantage Capital initiate formal due diligence in Colombia and Chile within the next 90 days. In addition, Mexico City logistics assets should be monitored as a secondary opportunity. While the Mexican regulatory environment presents some uncertainty, the infrastructure pipeline is considerable.
5.2 PORTFOLIO STRUCTURE
A blended portfolio — combining infrastructure debt and equity positions — is considered optimal. Furthermore, it should be noted that a phased entry strategy would reduce initial capital exposure. Admittedly, phased entry may delay return realisation; nevertheless, this approach is consistent with the fund's stated risk parameters.
5.3 TIMELINE
Above all, the 90-day timeline for due diligence is critical. Consequently, internal resource allocation at Vantage should be confirmed no later than end of Q2. It should be stressed that any delay in this process will affect the recommended entry window. As evidenced by comparable transactions in the region, timing is a material factor in infrastructure deal returns.
Santiago Reyes / Marco Peña — Altius Consulting Group | April 2026 |
Practice Exercises
4 questionsNew exercises to reinforce what you learned. Different from the lesson material.
The market is growing rapidly. ___, regulatory risk remains a concern.
Costs increased by 18% last year. ___, three major suppliers exited the market.
Several issues were identified, ___ the lack of a formal compliance framework.
___ the data is limited, the findings align with comparable sector studies.
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